Katrina’s Reviews > Fighting Destiny > Status Update
Katrina
is 80% done
1. Ryder is an ass of monumental proportions.
2. After hunt sequent - pages and pages of sex and talk like a dialogue from porn movie . Got so tedious, kept skipping them.
3. Constant F-bombs. Remove them and the book will be 15% shorter. 5 in 7-line paragraph? Much easier to drop a profanity to heighten emotional impact. Try to do it without sounding like a gutter-mouth.
— Apr 12, 2015 07:10PM
2. After hunt sequent - pages and pages of sex and talk like a dialogue from porn movie . Got so tedious, kept skipping them.
3. Constant F-bombs. Remove them and the book will be 15% shorter. 5 in 7-line paragraph? Much easier to drop a profanity to heighten emotional impact. Try to do it without sounding like a gutter-mouth.
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