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The heroine of this is such a Mary Sue. I guess in fairness that's not so unusual for so-so SF, it's just usually a Gary Stu, but combined with the sloppy prose it's making it hard to feel fully engaged - I feel like we're constantly learning that the heroine is the Best Ever at yet another new thing. It takes the mystery out of all these new discoveries!
— Apr 25, 2023 01:27PM
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The narrative is moving fast but my gosh, the writing is clunky - and more than that, it could really have used an editor. (Someone looked "discomforted" - no, they looked discomfited! And don't end your sentences with prepositions!)
— Apr 25, 2023 05:54AM
