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It's difficult to keep up with who the narrator is. The person doesn't say and the thoughts are shared by all who narrate. Because of the confusion this causes, the story isn't very fluid and is hard to keep up with.
— Apr 02, 2015 12:37PM
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The story isn't coherent, but the language the author uses is beautiful.
— Apr 06, 2015 08:40AM
