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is 4% done
so far: a lot of plot, little characterization. it’s a lot different than anything i’ve read. for how little interaction we’ve had between draco and harry, we are moving kinda fast.
— Apr 20, 2023 11:07AM
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is 36% done
it’s entertaining but i feel no desire to keep reading because there’s no immediate threat. it’s just the main plot line which is very drawn out. there are some tense moments but they are quickly resolved. the author also takes some weird directions with plot lines where they cut them off before they start. i understand that the changes made justify events divulging from canon, but it makes the story much worse
— May 09, 2023 10:53AM
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is 24% done
this is getting so... cartoony? dumbledore is voldemort 2.0. ron and hermione are evil. the most random side characters are coupling. harry has no shortcomings or character flaws, and every morally ambiguous character is just PRETENDING to be mean. like it's fun but i can't take shit serious
— Apr 29, 2023 02:52PM
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is 10% done
the plot is not moving. maybe i need to get further into it to see, but there’s no immediate threat. there’s obviously the main plot line, but that’s very very drawn out. like harry is supposed to be hiding all of these things from dumbledore and his friends and it’s dangerous if they find out, but it’s almost too easy. no challenges, no tense moments, no close calls. i hope it picks up.
— Apr 22, 2023 08:21PM
