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Mario
is 73% done
I decided to end the story here. It's actually a good story, but I think I'd like it best if I leave the ending a mystery.
— Apr 06, 2023 03:02PM
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Mario
is 61% done
The author's usage of seamless interswitching between Toby talking to people and Owen is an interesting thing. Is it supposed to indicate that, to Toby, Owen is as normal to him as a human?
— Apr 06, 2023 01:52PM
Mario
is 55% done
I did not expect this direction. The author is doing a great job making me sympathize with Toby, his isolation and loneliness, and his deteriorating state of mind.
— Apr 06, 2023 01:38PM
Mario
is 46% done
Well, not worst case scenario but up there. Wondering how the story will go from here.
— Apr 06, 2023 01:11PM
Mario
is 43% done
There just seems so much wrong with introducing your girlfriend to the sasquatch-like monster living in the forest. That you fed two people too.
So much so that probably the most unexpected outcome is for everything to turn out well. In twist, that might be exactly what happens.
— Apr 06, 2023 01:04PM
So much so that probably the most unexpected outcome is for everything to turn out well. In twist, that might be exactly what happens.
Mario
is 34% done
I suppose it's the point but I'm not sure if he's really interacting with Owen or if he's insane
— Apr 06, 2023 02:34AM
Mario
is 23% done
Damn. Toby went from cringe loser to killer. This went from 40 to 100 real quick.
— Apr 06, 2023 12:39AM

