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Pamela
is on page 100 of 362
Sigh, I had high hopes for this book. But the pacing is way off, with way too fast a pace in certain scenes and then dragging on others. The FMC is vapid and completely inconsequential to the story this far as nothing but a pretty thing to be complemented by the MC. There is very little credibility in the romance between the two, with no depth, nor any attempt to include her into the adventure. I'm trudging through.
— Mar 26, 2023 06:26AM
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Pamela
is on page 157 of 362
Oh, my god! I'm not sure what bothers me more: the head hopping and disregard for POV, or how boring the love interest is. There is zero attraction between them, the focus on the superficial stuff is annoying. There is no depth of feeling. I'm about to DNR because I'm halfway through and I'm sorely disappointed.
— Mar 30, 2023 04:50AM
Pamela
is on page 25 of 362
I found the story so far intriguing. The pace is a bit hurried, rushing through the last pages of the chapter, not to mention the meet-cute between the FMC and the two potential love interests. This chapter could have been made into two to expand on the characters a bit more and slow it down.
The formating was a bit off putting, with random spaces between paragraphs, and there are lines that make very little sense
— Mar 22, 2023 05:41AM
The formating was a bit off putting, with random spaces between paragraphs, and there are lines that make very little sense