Ambrosia’s Reviews > Silver Fire > Status Update

She is messed up sexually, but thank goodness, he has the magic manhood that can fix all her ills. She certainly doesn't seem to have any sexual hang-ups with him, despite her background.

Why can't I delete the repeated postings of the same comment????

then the icky scene. <spoiler>. He is strongly attracted to the h, and he brings the h and her friend to his house to protect her after someone tried to kill her. But he forgot that he had a woman scheduled for that night. When she shows up, he doesn't have her leave. OH, NO. Instead, he has sex with her. Not once, but 3 times! With his DOOR OPEN so the h can hear and see them!! YUCK!!! </spoiler>

then the icky scene. <spoiler>. He is strongly attracted to the h, and he brings the h and her friend to his house to protect her after someone tried to kill her. But he forgot that he had a woman scheduled for that night. When she shows up, he doesn't have her leave. OH, NO. Instead, he has sex with her. Not once, but 3 times! With his DOOR OPEN so the h can hear and see them!! YUCK!!! </spoiler>

So I haven't progressed much further - not enough to see if the H redeems himself, but the icky scene is still bugging me. It seems unnecessary - we already know the H is a man-ho; he has three different women that he schedules to come to his house on different nights - sometimes alone, sometimes they bring additional women - to have sex with him. (This is all voluntary, not paid sex.). This is gross enough.

Ick. I don't find it sexy or appealing to have the heroine watch the hero have sex with another woman. And get turned on by watching. And vice versa. Man-ho heroes bug me. If he doesn't change his ways PDQ, this will become a DNF. And for that him to be the most she's been turned on in 13 years?? Ugh. It's almost the virgin and the man-ho trope.