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Timothy Ward
is 47% done
The story is mostly backstory at this point while they're stuck on the roof. There are moments of emotion that I'm enjoying, but I'm waiting for the story to move forward in the present. The narrator sometimes leaves awkward gaps between dialogue and the tags. It's too bad, because his voices are good and he's doing a good job otherwise.
— Mar 14, 2015 05:28AM
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Timothy Ward
is 30% done
Decent YA zombie story in journal form, but may not be enough of a fit for my kind of zombie stories.
— Mar 12, 2015 07:41PM
