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is on page 400 of 767
So, more than half through and we have had couple of bites of the main meal ... I think it is a talent to be able to stretch a book with only a minimal amount of information to such a degree! I mean it! if I was editing, out of those 400 pages I would have cut it down to 100 max. and that allowing for all the description and propaganda! and nothing would have been lost ...
— Mar 13, 2015 01:42PM
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Choko
is on page 150 of 767
Wow! 150 pages and more with no advancement in the story whatsoever and only a cringe -worthy monologue of a slavery praising "property " girl! How is it even possible for an author to write such meaningless and redundant soap -box tirade over such incredibly voluminous space achieving no progress in plot?!?!?!? I hope there is a point to all this ...
— Mar 12, 2015 02:00PM
