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There are a few cliches here, I guess. Most notably, it's definitely cliched for the protagonist to resist the patriarchy, and for her best friend to see less harm in it. But this is really well-written, and the characters are pretty interesting, so maybe it'll hold out.

— Mar 03, 2015 06:27PM

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Mike is on page 300 of 336

This is kind of sweet, although it's a fairly typical ending.

— Mar 17, 2015 02:51PM

Mike is on page 240 of 336

Shit is beginning to hit the fan. This is... alright, I guess. It's too cliched and predictable for me to totally get behind it.

— Mar 15, 2015 07:20PM

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The suspense is building, although this is still pretty cliche.

— Mar 14, 2015 02:35PM

Mike is on page 180 of 336

Quintus is intensely annoying. To be fair, he should be annoying, but Jesus. Even when he's supposed to be sympathetic, his annoyingness shines through. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but it is a thing.

— Mar 08, 2015 08:15PM

Mike is on page 150 of 336

Well that was suddenly very dark. The patriarchy makes me sad...

— Mar 07, 2015 07:33PM

Mike is on page 120 of 336

I'll admit it - I'm kind of skimming Tag's chapters. Lucia is just a lot more interesting.

— Mar 05, 2015 08:05PM

Mike is on page 90 of 336

Still a little cliched, but the girl protagonist (I can't remember the Roman names) is just such a good character.

— Mar 04, 2015 07:42PM

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This is certainly a breath of fresh air, compared to what I've been reading recently. We'll see if it's as good as it is different.