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I find myself constantly editing sentences. I don;t know if he purposefully did it that way to appeal to the masses, or if he really is just a terrible writer. Takes a long time to get to a point and kind of stumbles all over the place. Book could be a lot more concise! I keep getting lost in the details. But I keep chugging along! I hope there is something useful for me in here. Looking forward to the exercises.