Abby’s Reviews > The Running Dream > Status Update
Abby
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The main problem of my story is that Jessica's fundraiser is not earning enough money for her leg, and it looks like she won't be able to run again.
I think that the climax is when one person gives them around $10,000, which gets enough money for Jessica to get her running leg, and also some extra to pay the medical bills.
— Feb 09, 2023 10:41AM
I think that the climax is when one person gives them around $10,000, which gets enough money for Jessica to get her running leg, and also some extra to pay the medical bills.
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Abby
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At the first race that Jessica went to, she saw that Vanessa is a very stuck up girl, and that made her want to get a running leg even more, because she wants to beat Vanessa.
— Feb 02, 2023 10:38AM
Abby
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I like that the author includes a lot of description and allows me to feel a certain mood. For example, when Jessica went to the doctors office, the author described the waiting room as cold and the floor is stained dusty white. This gives me an eerie mood.
— Jan 26, 2023 10:39AM
Abby
is on page 84 of 339
In my book, I found alliteration.
On Pg. 71, it says "Some sort of seat while I shower."
I think the writer included this because they wanted me to picture what was happening easier.
— Jan 13, 2023 11:04AM
On Pg. 71, it says "Some sort of seat while I shower."
I think the writer included this because they wanted me to picture what was happening easier.
