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is 18% done
i feel like i’m tripping over metaphors left right and center—the prose is almost heady
— Feb 07, 2023 11:21AM
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Em
is 68% done
i’m sorry but this prose is ridiculous. there’s a difference between beautiful writing and overwrought, and the author has confused the two. i can’t tell what’s happening because i keep getting slapped over the head with these metaphors
— Feb 08, 2023 07:43AM
