J. W. Garrett’s Reviews > The Hypocrite: A Pride and Prejudice Variation > Status Update

Good Gosh, this is LONG! I'm at chapter 23 and it's only 48%. This is an interesting twist. Elizabeth didn't take any guff from Mr. Darcy. She took him to task for his behavior and left no stone unturned. When she was finished, he knew exactly her sentiments. This has been the weakest Bingley I have ever read. Good, grief. The man was whipped. Louisa was no better and it cost her dearly.