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DeAnna
is on page 10 of 400
supporting characters
1/23 A minor character in my book is Ma Fanny and Sally's family but I just read up 10 pages so I don't know much about the rest of her family so I pick Ma Fanny. the role Ma Fanny in the book is Sally's grandma. I think she is include in the book because her helps around with Sally and her brother. the reason i think she help around is because her mom and dad are busy. Ma Fanny is loyal &wise
— Jan 23, 2023 11:26AM
1/23 A minor character in my book is Ma Fanny and Sally's family but I just read up 10 pages so I don't know much about the rest of her family so I pick Ma Fanny. the role Ma Fanny in the book is Sally's grandma. I think she is include in the book because her helps around with Sally and her brother. the reason i think she help around is because her mom and dad are busy. Ma Fanny is loyal &wise
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DeAnna
is on page 93 of 400
2-13-23 climax
I predict that the climax in my book is going to be when she finally get to Florida that she is going to get made fun of her hair because while she has been traveling she found out she has lice. She doesn't known how to get rid of it because she keeps shampooing it but it doesn't go away so she went to see a nurse and they gave her a treatment to help with it , but what if it doesn't work ?
— Feb 13, 2023 11:20AM
I predict that the climax in my book is going to be when she finally get to Florida that she is going to get made fun of her hair because while she has been traveling she found out she has lice. She doesn't known how to get rid of it because she keeps shampooing it but it doesn't go away so she went to see a nurse and they gave her a treatment to help with it , but what if it doesn't work ?
DeAnna
is on page 60 of 400
2/6
inciting incident
The inciting incident in my book is a girl named sally that she is moving to Miami beach for winter of 1947, and she is excited and scared at the same time. The reason she is scared is because she doesn't know if she going to make friends or if she will fill in.
— Feb 06, 2023 11:23AM
inciting incident
The inciting incident in my book is a girl named sally that she is moving to Miami beach for winter of 1947, and she is excited and scared at the same time. The reason she is scared is because she doesn't know if she going to make friends or if she will fill in.
DeAnna
is on page 56 of 400
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The 7 story archetypes
I would say that the book 7 story archetypes is the quest because she is about to moving to Florida and base on what I just read its that she has mixed feeling about move. Like if hes is going to fit where she goes like school , will she make friends.
— Jan 31, 2023 11:59AM
The 7 story archetypes
I would say that the book 7 story archetypes is the quest because she is about to moving to Florida and base on what I just read its that she has mixed feeling about move. Like if hes is going to fit where she goes like school , will she make friends.
