Ponytaorponyboy’s Reviews > The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake > Status Update
Ponytaorponyboy
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part two already?! why's it about Joseph xD for a moment there I thought it was a change in narration
— Jan 15, 2015 06:09PM
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Ponytaorponyboy
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The Slice of Life-ness of this would bore me to bits if it wasn't for a good narration and a good character relationship with the reader. Nicely done!
— Jan 16, 2015 05:26AM
Ponytaorponyboy
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I'm wary that her mother might not have the proper mood to be making the food....
— Jan 13, 2015 11:36AM
Ponytaorponyboy
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Whoaaa, I wonder if other people will understand her... other than George
— Jan 12, 2015 05:02PM
