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The way it’s written is hard to follow at times. It keeps you on your toes but it jumps around so much it can lose you if you aren’t truly following.
The jumps aren’t bridged very well so there were a few times I didn’t quite realized it jumped to a new locate or different persons perspective. In those moments I found myself having to reread just to make sure I was following along correctly.
— Dec 23, 2022 12:12PM
The jumps aren’t bridged very well so there were a few times I didn’t quite realized it jumped to a new locate or different persons perspective. In those moments I found myself having to reread just to make sure I was following along correctly.
