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Hrm. Slightly disappointed. This was working its way up to a fantastically twisted love triangle but then it just fizzled. If the ending had gone the way I was lead to believe it was going, it would have been so much more poignant.
Apr 06, 2011 12:56AM
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Shannon
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It would be really funny if when all is said and done, the prince is like, "woah ... WOAH. I don't even know you chicks, let alone want to marry you." Ha. So yeah, neither of them is even taking his feelings into account.
Apr 05, 2011 10:08PM
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Shannon
Shannon is on page 118 of 240
Oh man, this is going to be such a train wreck. It's making me cringe. I can't imagine how this can end happily for anyone.
Apr 05, 2011 09:54PM
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Shannon
Shannon is on page 90 of 240
Man, the mermaid sure is getting a bum deal. And this is why blind faith can be so ... stupid.
Apr 05, 2011 08:32PM
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Shannon
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"A jug of amber liquid lay tipped over on the floor, and she went to it, uncorked it and lifted it to her mouth. Her first sip was straight seawater. She drank until the spirit hit her, burning down her throat, and she spat it out. Awful. She grabbed a fish swirling by and stuffed it into her mouth, bit down on its sweet flesh, its crunching bones, but the taste still lingered in her mouth."
Apr 05, 2011 07:34PM
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Shannon is on page 10 of 240
"Her sisters, more than anyone, had mocked Lenia's love for humans. Nadine would bring Lenia the bones of sailors and, whenever she could get to them before the fish, decaying body parts. 'Look how disgusting,' she would say, holding up a disintegrating finger, pieces of skin flapping off it like small sails. 'Look what happens to them.'"
Apr 05, 2011 05:59PM
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