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is 91% done
All that buildup just to forget to mention it inside the scene? Seriously it skipped over anything that would have made it make sense.
— Jan 08, 2015 08:40AM
Adam Smith
is 78% done
No one has names in this book. Just titles and semi-racist slurs.
— Jan 08, 2015 12:34AM
Adam Smith
is 37% done
A third of the way in and no sign of what the synopsis promised. An awful lot of telling, very little showing, and a good part of the telling is irrelevant. It's going to be one of those books, isn't it?
— Jan 06, 2015 10:51PM
