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We were both screaming and crying when my mom and Aunt Liz came running into the room.

“What the hell is going on?” Aunt Claire shouted

This is Charlotte’s POV. Liz is her mother not her aunt. Claire is Gavin’s mother. Proofread much? I can’t believe all the inconsistencies and errors in this book!

The ages are all messed up. Now it says Gavin was 9 when Charlotte was 6. Previous books said that Gavin was almost 11 when Charlotte was 6. This author should have made a chart.

Molly is five years younger than me

Wow! She aged faster than Charlotte did. In Drew’s book it said that Charlotte was 6, Ava was 5, and Molly was 3. That seems like a 3 year age difference. 🤔

At this moment, I should probably threaten Tyler’s life and tell him that Ava is like a sister to me and if he hurts her I will dismember him. But really it’s Tyler I’m worried about. Ava is like a praying mantis on crack. She will not only chew off his head after she has sex with him, she will have sex with his headless body afterwards and then light it on fire.

Then they deserve each other.

I really don’t like Gavin’s best friend Tyler. He’s a jerk. I thought Drew was bad, but in a different way, Tyler is so much worse. Drew was gross and immature. Tyler is disgusting, disrespectful, and mean. He tells Gavin he’s trying to “help” him, but everything ends up hurting Gavin.