Sadie Forsythe’s Reviews > Shrouds of Darkness > Status Update
Sadie Forsythe
is 8% done
Not an auspicious start. Already we've had a 1st ch. that would be better termed a prologue, a lengthy flashback, reminiscing about a friend and an info-dump. I'm still waiting for more than about a page of actual story (and I'm not exaggerating).
If not for previous reviewers who promise it takes a few chapters to settle, I'd be considering a DNF.
— Dec 15, 2014 10:58AM
If not for previous reviewers who promise it takes a few chapters to settle, I'd be considering a DNF.
Like flag
Sadie’s Previous Updates
Sadie Forsythe
is 25% done
Well, it does seem to be smoothing out and picking up. That's good.
— Dec 15, 2014 01:59PM
Sadie Forsythe
is 8% done
...a scream cuts through the darkness. I pause, more out of curiosity than any sort of concern for whatever trouble a woman who was not smart enough to avoid has found...Probably just a whore getting slapped around by her pimp anyway.
Wow, victim blaming, dismissal of male responsibility for their own actions & dehumanisation/denial of human rights because involvement n the sex industry all in one passage
— Dec 15, 2014 11:33AM
Wow, victim blaming, dismissal of male responsibility for their own actions & dehumanisation/denial of human rights because involvement n the sex industry all in one passage
