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ayusha
is 42% done
Having a hard time really getting into this because the writing feels rigid and clunky and that’s compounded with the two 1st person POVs which is not for me. Would’ve been much better if this was 3rd person
— Oct 13, 2022 07:31AM
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ayusha
is 63% done
Fighting for my life trying to get through this book. I absolutely cannot stand when there are “broken thoughts” and the text has 83947 dashes. See:
“But in the wake of a disaster like Starved Rock, and New Pythos’s threat hanging over us like a storm about to drop—
In the face of almost certain violence and death against family—
If they’re in contact—”
NO
— Oct 17, 2022 10:53AM
“But in the wake of a disaster like Starved Rock, and New Pythos’s threat hanging over us like a storm about to drop—
In the face of almost certain violence and death against family—
If they’re in contact—”
NO
