Susan’s Reviews > The Marriage Masquerade > Status Update

Wow, this is incredibly stupid and frustrating to read this neverending inane conversation about who is going to go see about the woman's screams. Way to take all the urgency and suspense out of the story. The pacing in this book is so weird. Every scene is so overwriitten.

Like other past unimportant scenes, this hair dressing scene has gone on for pages and pages with unending internal blather by the heroine.

Um, I'm not sure this author has any understanding of the rules of primogeniture at all. The duke's widowed mother would never be able to produce another heir regardless of his age. And a male cousin of the duke through his mother's side of the family is also not a possibility.