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Yvonne
is 44% done
“Dorian is slumped on the floor near the boxes, unconscious but obviously breathing and Zachary feels something in his heart unclench that he didn’t realize had been clenched in the first place and he is mildly annoyed by the implication of that but then he is distracted by the other door.” 💀
— Sep 22, 2022 10:29PM
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Yvonne
is 44% done
I’m now convinced the author didn’t know any conjunctions other than the basic “and”, “but”, “as” and decided to use them with an unmatched fervor.
— Sep 22, 2022 10:31PM
