Book Wyrm’s Reviews > Beneath the Rising > Status Update

The opening of the book was chaotic, not as in things happening but in the way that it flowed. I felt like a third wheel to the two characters who were telling inside jokes that fell flat.
20 pages in - it sorts itself out and I'm kinda slowly getting into it.

Also spelling mistakes + using big words for the sake of it while thinking the reader is a scientist. Had to do my own research just to kinda get the jargon.