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Jo’s going to teach every girl in America how to become a skilled fighter?
— Aug 28, 2022 05:36PM
Holly
is 81% done
This is trying REALLY hard to be a feminist, girl power, F the man book… I love the intent, but it’s trying too hard.
Also this magic system is kind isnt being sold very well. Seeing the dead and garden witches make sense, but what on earth is Jo’s power? Is this from X-men lore?
— Aug 28, 2022 05:23PM
Also this magic system is kind isnt being sold very well. Seeing the dead and garden witches make sense, but what on earth is Jo’s power? Is this from X-men lore?
