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Jennifer
is 8% done
Unless you're using dialogue, you can't say 'I', 'my', or 'we' in one sentence and then use 'she', 'her', and 'they' in the next. I don't understand how there are so many 4+ star reviews when there are mixed tenses! I guess people are either really stupid, or they just have really low standards.
— Nov 13, 2014 09:08AM
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Jennifer
is 60% done
I am very over this whole "babydoc" thing. I can't be the only person that thinks obstetrician when reading that, right?!
— Nov 13, 2014 04:37PM
Jennifer
is starting
A couple pages in and the author is already switching between first and third person. Crap.
— Nov 12, 2014 10:28PM

