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Mike
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Is Leshaya ever going to get better? Like, is she going to stop living self-destructively and irresponsibly? Because it's getting a little tiresome.
Nov 12, 2014 06:34PM
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Mike
Mike is on page 150 of 284
So trying to get famous sucks. Also, it's too bad Harmon's family didn't want her anymore. That made me sad.
Nov 11, 2014 05:33PM
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Mike
Mike is on page 120 of 284
This is kind of sad to read. Leshaya's lack of social skill really comes through, and it's a little painful to watch.
Nov 10, 2014 01:21PM
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Mike
Mike is on page 60 of 284
This would be really good if there was anything here that wouldn't work perfectly fine either as a summary or as a flashback. I want the story to start.
Nov 09, 2014 07:56AM
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Mike
Mike is on page 30 of 284
I don't like books that open with 50 pages of the main character's backstory. Just a note to any authors that might be in the audience.
Nov 08, 2014 06:03PM
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