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Alex
is 63% done
Sodergren mentioned three times how Ricky swallowed his own semen. What is wrong with this guy?
— Aug 15, 2022 09:02PM
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Alex
is 84% done
The action falls flat, at least to me. It's all mindless spilling of guts and bodily fluids. There's no sense of struggle, and the monsters aren't that threatening as they're mangled by the smallest efforts from characters that have no combat training.
Also, the pop culture references feel out of place.
— Aug 19, 2022 02:46AM
Also, the pop culture references feel out of place.

Alex
is 83% done
Now the monsters got interesting. This could've been a decent short story, maybe. I don't think any ending can make up for how bland most of the novel was. The characters, the situations, the themes, nothing was strong enough to carry the story.
— Aug 19, 2022 01:00AM

Alex
is 80% done
Chakrit is a boring character, no depth at all. Ana and Rachel technically have some depth I guess, but not much. Also, it makes no sense how people in this book turn insane, there's nothing lovecraftian about it. Giant spiders and mutants, really.
Let's see if the last pages can convince me otherwise. I doubt it.
— Aug 18, 2022 08:56PM
Let's see if the last pages can convince me otherwise. I doubt it.

Alex
is 66% done
I learned a new word, languorously. I will never use it again.
— Aug 16, 2022 07:11AM

Alex
is 64% done
"Oh hi, guts, he thought. Good to see you again."
Very funny.
— Aug 15, 2022 09:04PM
Very funny.

Alex
is 63% done
This book is crap. I don't see any merit in its existence at this point.
— Aug 15, 2022 08:59PM