Rebecca’s Reviews > Margaret Dashwood's Diary > Status Update

Margaret, you can be so dense sometimes! Also, stop putting bullet holes in the best men in this book!

Continuity errors aside, I am hooked. Also, I love this version of Eliza Williams. She is fierce!

Her half brother's name is John not Robert. Robert is the brother-in-law.

Writing could be better, but I'm intrigued.

This book has quite a few continuity issues, ages Eliza was 15 not 16 when she had a baby, what age Margaret was when her father died, and how far along in her pregnancy Marianne was prior to Colonel Brandon leaving to investigate a string of murders linked to a smuggling ring just to name a few. The story is told so haphazardly as to make it more jarring. That being said this has the potential to be entertaining.