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Mel B
is 9% done
So far the dialogue is too mechanical, boring and predictable. The writing and the explanation of every eye movement is getting on my nerves. Grrrr. Should I read on?
— Oct 27, 2014 10:31PM
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Mel B
is 9% done
So far the dialogue is too mechanical, boring and predictable. Grrrr. Should I read on?
— Oct 27, 2014 10:25PM
Mel B
is 9% done
So far the dialogue is too mechanical, boring and predictable. Grrrr. Should I read on?
— Oct 27, 2014 10:24PM
