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Eric
Eric is on page 58 of 208
My author makes really good at describing stuff because he makes really good wording at times like there was a fire and he put you can hear the crackling of the fire and thick black smoke everywhere. He is lacking how when the main character goes outside he doesn't describe how cold it is or what is the weather looks like.
Oct 23, 2014 11:09AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)

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Eric
Eric is on page 180 of 208
I would title it the unforgiving trip because they went through a lot of pain because of all the blood,sweat,tears they went through.If I was ware they are now I will love to be ware they are because all my friends say I am the type of kid that loves the wild because all I talk about is Canada and all it traits.
Oct 31, 2014 11:28AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 180 of 208
I would title it the unforgiving trip because they went through a lot of pain because of all the blood tears they went through be ware they are now I will love to be ware they are because all mi friends say I am the type of kid that loves the wild because all I talk about is Canada and all it traces.
Oct 31, 2014 11:23AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 180 of 208
I would title it the unforgiving trip because they went through a lot of pain because of all the blood tears they went through be ware they are now I will love to be ware they are because all mi friends say I am the type of kid that loves the wild because all I talk about is Canada and all it taters.
Oct 31, 2014 11:13AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 148 of 208
My book makes me sad sometimes because they were walking in the woods of Alaska and Jason cut his knee on a stump coming from the ground. That's why it makes me sad because they had to wait to mine for at least a week. It makes me think because there is this one part that they were stuck at a part ware the river came to a fork it was either take the shallow way or take the way ware there is foot tracks.
Oct 30, 2014 11:03AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 122 of 208
My favorite part of the book is ware I just got to because they are heading out and they ran into a problem ware they were in the canoe and they ran into a bear trying to get salmon for lunch and they had to stop the canoe so they don't anger the bear and they stopped. They were siting there and a cub of that bear came out of the woods so clumsy as can be with out thinking steppe into the water and it scared him.
Oct 29, 2014 10:59AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 104 of 208
I would tell Will Hobbs that he did a good job at adding description words and scenes through out the book like where he puts the characters in a scene whare they were in the woods in the winter I could tell it was cold because the characters put a cup of water outside and it froze within 30 minutes.
Oct 27, 2014 11:01AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 63 of 208
My character is changing a lot because at the beginning of the book he was all impatient and wanted every thing to go mining for gold and now he knows that it takes long and hard work to get the stuff needed to mine. Now him and his sister got every ting but the money to get in the Yukon to go mining to try to presume their dreams of being gold miners and millionaires a pound of gold is worth $17,972.
Oct 24, 2014 11:11AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 42 of 208
I would change the book to have it be ware they would live the river and search got gold and try to get rich. The book will get a lot better because I really love adventure books but it all depends on what the book is about. I like survival books so if they combine the book with some survival the book will astonishing and I will love to read that book.
Oct 22, 2014 11:06AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


Eric
Eric is on page 23 of 208
My character is having troubles by he wants to be rich and make his dream of finding gold and he is hale way because he got a pan and he got it at a auction got $5 and it was pretty good. He got that plus a new row boat to carry all his stuff down the Yukon to ware he finds the gold. I wish I was rich and be in the NHL but that will never happen if I don't do anything about it and ware would I get the money from.
Oct 21, 2014 10:57AM
Down the Yukon: A Thrilling Adventure About the Alaska Gold Rush Race for Kids (Ages 8-12)


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