Joe Kessler’s Reviews > A Far Wilder Magic > Status Update
Joe Kessler
is 9% done
Not digging the apparent instant attraction between our two protagonists, but I'm tentatively on-board to see how the fantasy Judaism, Catholicism, and Protestantism are handled.
— Jul 11, 2022 12:07PM
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Joe Kessler
is 39% done
This worldbuilding is laughable. The Sumics have bishops and a pope. The Yu'adir practice tikkun olam. There was just a reference to the year 1718 as "two centuries ago." In a story with, yeah, roughly 1920s technology and clothing styles.
So why the fake country and religion names?? Just call things what they are if you aren't interested in remixing them at all. Pretending it's an alternate world is weird.
— Jul 11, 2022 05:30PM
So why the fake country and religion names?? Just call things what they are if you aren't interested in remixing them at all. Pretending it's an alternate world is weird.
