Avelyn’s Reviews > These Violent Delights > Status Update
Avelyn
is 27% done
27% in and the lengthy exposition is STILL coming, so much for Shakespearean pacing
— Jun 01, 2022 12:08PM
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Avelyn
is 71% done
getting a whole lot better. characters are fleshed out more, but PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS HOLY let them develop and interact with each other without being interrupted by screams or the monster.
— Jun 01, 2022 06:32PM
Avelyn
is 33% done
some domestic bencutio 1920s shanghai AU right here. closest thing to romance in the book so far
— Jun 01, 2022 01:06PM
