Miscellaneous Allie’s Reviews > The Broken Kingdoms > Status Update
Miscellaneous Allie
is 70% done
She just saw Hado smile when he's demonstrated to be a silhouette to her. There's been a lot of slips where she sees mortal expressions and I blame that on the editor, they should have caught that.
— May 28, 2022 01:03AM
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Miscellaneous Allie
is 60% done
I thought nahadoth could hear everything in the night. Doesn't someone just have to say "hey these guys are the ones doing the killings and are the ones you're looking for"? I feel like a murder mystery doesn't quite match his power
— May 28, 2022 12:13AM
Miscellaneous Allie
is 43% done
Ngl I was really enjoying the different vibe and pacing from the first story and I don't love that this cult is so similar in structure and style from what was the entire fucking plot of the first book. It's like the worst part was brought back when I thought it was moved beyond
— May 27, 2022 10:41PM
Miscellaneous Allie
is 23% done
Like I feel like as much plot has happened in 23% of this book as happened in the entirety of the first book gottdamn
— May 27, 2022 06:48PM
Miscellaneous Allie
is 20% done
The vibes are totally different in this one and the world building is SO much better and richer than the first one holy shit
— May 27, 2022 06:16PM
