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Vallsykes
is 87% done
He was here, contemplating a newfound appreciation for those who were left behind...
Turnabout is fair play, but reciprocity is unconditionally divine.
This sleepy plot has uncoiled into a pretty decent story. Good writing will do that.
— Sep 02, 2014 09:01AM
Turnabout is fair play, but reciprocity is unconditionally divine.
This sleepy plot has uncoiled into a pretty decent story. Good writing will do that.
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Vallsykes
is 62% done
"I can’t go to pieces like I did the last time you left.”
These two need to get it together...
— Aug 31, 2014 08:53PM
These two need to get it together...
Vallsykes
is 48% done
This exposition is sort of sprawling with scenery and lulling with half mystery. This couple obviously has the attraction....now, what are they gonna do about it?!
— Aug 27, 2014 06:00AM
Vallsykes
is 31% done
Desire eddied around their ankles like a rising tide. The dim light picked out the planes of his cheekbones and forehead but threw the rest of his face into shadow.
Subtle, electric and sensual.
— Aug 25, 2014 09:24PM
Subtle, electric and sensual.
Vallsykes
is 16% done
Hands on his hips, he watched her drive away, like the conversation was over.
It wasn’t.
Hmmm...I wonder about these two.
— Aug 25, 2014 11:56AM
It wasn’t.
Hmmm...I wonder about these two.
