Mel’s Reviews > Daddy's Girl > Status Update
Mel
is 38% done
Actually some really good plot development and character arcs here. Not just smutty smut smut for the sake of smut lol
— May 08, 2022 10:44AM
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Mel
is 80% done
Ow drama over thankfully. It actually was a good catalyst for the story to progress. Whatever I guess I was wrong. :sticks tongue out :
— May 08, 2022 11:31AM
Mel
is 63% done
Aaand that's a whole sex scene jj am skipping through. OW can fuck right off
— May 08, 2022 11:19AM
Mel
is 56% done
Great, OW drama at 56%. I fucking hate that. No, you will not fuck away the thoughts you have by fucking some rando. You know that, I know that, everyone knows that. I hate sex scenes with OW. this has lost a star for me so far. Hopefully they can be redeemed
— May 08, 2022 11:16AM

