Tina's Bookish Life’s Reviews > Devilish > Status Update

I can't believe I'm just now thinking about this but how ridiculous is it that a person who doesn't even believe in god can just react so casually to meeting the devil??

"And Alicia wasn’t the nicest person in the world. She had a sort of goth look to her, with straight black hair, dark make-up and a hole in her right nostril where a piercing certainly went outside of work hours. She had an attitude to match her dark appearance."

yes of course find a reason to justify RAPE but lets VILLAINIZE GOTH PEOPLE right makes total sense

"He was telling her that he wouldn’t force himself on her. A small, dark part of her wished he would. Then she could have what her body was craving without taking any of the responsibility for it."

ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOT
I understand this is fiction. But even putting that kind of idea out there for A FUCKING RAPIST TO FIND AND USE TO JUSTIFY HIS BEHAVIOR?? NO.

"You’re submission will be all the sweeter the longer I have to wait.”

ITS "YOUR" NOT "YOU'RE"
also literally 2 pages ago this bitch said she wouldn't have sex with him but I guess we abandoned that thought

"He threw out-of-this-world parties, and, from what Felicity discovered in her research, he even sang his own songs at these events, a mixture of hip-hop, techno, and rock."

yeah no this is definitely Lucifer fanfiction

this sounds like Lucifer (the show) fanfiction