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Michelle
is 92% done
I don't know if I lime tuis or not. It's fine as far as plot goes but world building? Nope. Too male, alpha a**holery. Do what I say or spanked. I mean even going so far as to wash your mouth with soap. That one thing just makes me hesitant to want to read more. But knowing me I'll pick up the next one
— May 02, 2022 03:57AM
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Michelle
is 48% done
Okay there is formula writing and then there is this. Aim for a very small group of readers
This is Alpha that I don't like. From the word go you have to be obedient. You have no say unless its in line with his wishes. Spanking and subservience is top order for this world building. I just want to say you juts met and already your forcing your wants and wishes. And the discussion? Yeah not really.
— May 01, 2022 01:58AM
This is Alpha that I don't like. From the word go you have to be obedient. You have no say unless its in line with his wishes. Spanking and subservience is top order for this world building. I just want to say you juts met and already your forcing your wants and wishes. And the discussion? Yeah not really.
Michelle
is 28% done
This is so one track minded. Me alpha and you will do everything I want, how, when, and as I like it.
The h is really fighting this male chauvinistic way but in the end I think she will give in to it. I now have to make up my mind if I'll overlook a lot.
Remind me a lot of Pepper North with that same one track everything.
— Apr 30, 2022 12:11PM
The h is really fighting this male chauvinistic way but in the end I think she will give in to it. I now have to make up my mind if I'll overlook a lot.
Remind me a lot of Pepper North with that same one track everything.
