the_cat’s Reviews > Death on the Marais > Status Update
the_cat
is 60% done
I'm not too happy with how the story is planned. They go to Paris to talk to someone, get an address and then they go back home and forget about the address till the next day so they have to drive back to Paris. (??)
Or they drive from a to b then walk from b to c and drive back from c to b (!!) So odd...
— Aug 21, 2014 04:00PM
Or they drive from a to b then walk from b to c and drive back from c to b (!!) So odd...
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the_cat
is 99% done
While the mystery was fine and I've enjoyed the humorous bits I'm a little annoyed by some basic mistakes that don't make much sense. For instance: The guy is shot in the ribs. Still, his shirt and coat can be fixed with a brush. (???) And all the useless driving around...
— Aug 22, 2014 03:48PM
