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AGAIN!! “The rest of the evening flew by in a blur of laughter, conversation, and delicious food.”

All we got were brief hellos and introductions, and a repeated conversation from earlier in the book about Maks’s job in the military.

Where is the substance in this book???

Maks took Jasper to a family gathering and what we get is a brief interaction of hellos and, “the rest of the afternoon passed in a blur or conversation, jokes, and storytelling.”

This book is so short! It would have been nice to read about some of that gathering so we had a sense of things. Everything is so surface! I’m disappointed.

So we’re getting a dual POV, but the conversation that was between the two MCs in the first chapter is now being repeated in the second chapter. According to Amazon, this book is a short 178 pages. If we’re going to read every conversation twice, this is going to be even shorter…not to mention extremely annoying. I hate when authors do that.