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Emily
is 32% done
Enjoying the story so far. There are a few wording issues, but the story is good enough to over look them.
— Aug 17, 2014 07:06PM
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Emily
is 36% done
Christmas was mentioned so forget part if that last update.
— Aug 17, 2014 07:53PM
Emily
is 32% done
There are also some timing issues (i.e., it's Tuesday, but Derek says it's the weekend, it's Christmas, but no mention of it past Christmas Eve, etc.). It's still been a good story. These things just make me stop and wonder if I missed something.
— Aug 17, 2014 07:21PM
