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Julianna
Julianna is 3% done
Alexi's writing style is not agreeing with me. Her choice to write in present tense is uncomfortable--unflowing. She already mistakenly used past tense several times. I hope the actual story promises better things...
Jul 21, 2014 02:01AM
The Art of Becoming Homeless

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Julianna
Julianna is 11% done
Oh em gee, nope nope I can't do it. I can't finish this book.
Jul 21, 2014 02:33AM
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Julianna
Julianna is 7% done
Her sentence structure is so weird.

"It’s a long time since anyone has."

Who even speaks like that
Jul 21, 2014 02:15AM
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