Ashley Efird’s Reviews > Love of a Rockstar > Status Update
Ashley Efird
is 86% done
I'm gonna have to just DNF this one. The more I try to make myself finish, the more irritated I get. Trite, overdone story, can't stand either main character, and needs editing. At one point H pulls some ice out of freezer and wraps it for a compress, within a couple paragraphs h is returning "bag of frozen peas" to the freezer! Its bad when I really liked the "other guy" better than the mc!
— Jul 20, 2014 10:18PM
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