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Christopher Patterson
is 12% done
The idea of muskets and elves is pretty cool. On chapter 9. Other than muskets and elves, its a little unoriginal and there isnt much left to the imagination. Alot of telling and not a lot of showing.
— Jul 20, 2014 07:27AM
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Christopher Patterson
is 19% done
The idea of muskets and elves is pretty cool. On chapter 9. Other than muskets and elves, its a little unoriginal and there isnt much left to the imagination. Alot of telling and not a lot of showing.
— Jul 21, 2014 08:57AM
