Ms. McFaul’s Reviews > Fire Becomes Her > Status Update

Ms. McFaul
is on page 269 of 368
Still a giant meh. Some major plot holes/not plausible actions.
— Mar 07, 2022 08:12AM
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Ms. McFaul
is 35% done
Lots of talking. Not much action. Also, I am sick of the "love" garbage and am concerned that she's just bouncing to the next guy.
— Mar 04, 2022 09:08AM

Ms. McFaul
is 11% done
The opening is like a flapper era Hunger Games with magic. I hope that there's more to it?
— Mar 03, 2022 10:20AM