Sam L’s Reviews > The Brotherhood of Dwarves > Status Update
Sam L
is 44% done
the protagonist can see really well in the dark because dwarves live underground in caves but above ground at night he has poor eyesight beyond a hundred yards?? OK then
— Jun 18, 2014 04:14PM
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Sam L
is 40% done
Everything seems forced..... the dialogue doesn't flow naturally. trying to stick with it though..
— Jun 18, 2014 03:05PM
