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Piper
is 60% done
This author needs some help in continuity, and perhaps research! And punctuation, and usage, and everything! This is horrid!
— Jun 17, 2014 10:03AM
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Piper
is 64% done
And they go suddenly from devouring each other to him putting his socks on. Whiplash much?
— Jun 17, 2014 10:11AM
Piper
is 62% done
And I'm really concerned about how his touch apparently makes her breast swell. She might want to have that looked at.
— Jun 17, 2014 10:08AM
Piper
is 15% done
Writing is kind of abysmal at this point. Stop flip-flopping between calling the main character Grayson and Grace. Pick one and stick with it already!
— Jun 10, 2014 10:14AM
