Julia’s Reviews > Evenfall: Volume 2: Director's Cut > Status Update

I don't want to give a book with grammatical errors and a bunch of boring, skippable paragraphs 5 stars, but nearing the end I find myself increasingly unable to help it. 5/5 for thorowly outweighing the bad with plenty of good and then some

Let me just repeat HOW much better the writing has become. Dare I even say it? It's Good now. Capital G, yes. The revelations about characters are done well now, too. Well, there are still punctuation errors and the occasional mistake in grammar. But let's not be harsh. It's not a published work and it's freely accecible, so who cares. What one may care about, however, is that it's, well, loaded with triggers.

So far, this is a 4/5. The writing is better than in volume one and the content is right up my alley