Geekess’s Reviews > The Deathless > Status Update

The frequent switching of viewpoint was a bit confusing at the start, but quickly the story sank it's claws into my flesh. I like the worldbuilding. It feels fresh. The words are well-crafted. Not entirely sure about the narrator though. She reads a bit too slow and wooden, emphasis often on the wrong parts of the sentence, trying to add drama, and overdoing it slightly. But I can probably speed that up a little.